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This pic was a request for ~Venom2204 for his birthday, I hope you like it! ^^

Venom belongs to Marvel

~~~~Picture Info~~~~
Program Used: GIMP2.8
Tool Used: Mouse
Time Taken: Approx 1-3 days
References: [link]
Speedpaint?: Nope
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Critique by ~MrElementron-dA Nov 19, 2012, 12:22:51 AM
Hello, this is my first time doing a critique, so be prepared for fails(s) in this one.

First of all, I had seen many artworks with a similar style as this. (Try out: MLP: Two Sides of [insert MLP character here]. Not that I'm trying to be mean but, the coloring and shading needs a LIITLE more practice. Try using the Burn tool thingy in GIMP and change the opacity to 90 and gently apply the shading, oh, and try using a font when applying text :)

Thank you for reading my VERY FIRST critique. Hope to see you improve! (In a positive way, of course..)
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!Le-Spaghetti-Lord Nov 19, 2012  Student Filmographer
This sucks big time bro. Oh well, I know what'll cheer u up. How about some delicious spaghetti?
file:///Users/alonzobravo/Pictures/Stuff%20From%20Ze%20Internet/Spaghetti.jpg
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*TheFelineLife Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! ^^
Sorry, I don't want any spaghetti right now, but thanks for the offer. :)
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!Le-Spaghetti-Lord Nov 20, 2012  Student Filmographer
You sure? Spaghetti is real good you know, although too much is unhealthy, just ask Venom2204 about that.
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*TheFelineLife Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Spaghetti is good, but I don't eat it too often.
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!Le-Spaghetti-Lord Nov 20, 2012  Student Filmographer
Good, too much of them noodles can have terrible side effects on a man, just look at what happened to Venom2204 the poor soul.
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*TheFelineLife Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
He looks fine to me. :\

Now, stop trying to troll people, you're only going to make yourself look bad in the end.
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!Le-Spaghetti-Lord Nov 20, 2012  Student Filmographer
Im not trolling, I am telling you the truth. Too much spaghetti is bad for your membrane.
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*TheFelineLife Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I beg to differ, I understand you have a liking for spaghetti but it doesn't let you insult people.
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~MrElementron-dA Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Tip: When drawing people's faces, lower down the eyes a bit. Their position is supposed to create a 'triangle' between the nose. So that I looks more human :iconehehplz:(That's not supposed to insult you, though..)
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*TheFelineLife Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Its not an insult, thanks for the tip. ^^
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